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Week 14 Story Lab

This week for my story lab I decided to do some additional research for my last Storybook entry. My story is a take on The Jungle Book and focuses primarily on Mowgli's point of view as he navigates the ins and outs of life in the jungle. I decided to base my story on the first Chapter of the Jungle Book, Mowgli's Brothers. I briefly read the story before writing my piece but decided to go back and do some additional more in-depth research of the story before making my corrections and adding additional details. Here are some of the things I was able to find:

1. The story starts the evening prior to the morning in my story. I can either stick with this idea or keep it the way I have it. If I wanted to elongate the story, I could always start it the evening before as well.
2. There are ALOT of details and ALOT of imagery used in the first sentence alone. Maybe I can try and add more details to grab the attention of the reader.
3. Just like my story, there are brief instances of dialogue. Not a ton though.
3. Mother and Father Wold have four baby cubs. It might be a good idea to add this into my story as well.
4. Refer to Shere Khan as the Big One in my story just like they do in the original.
5. Be sure to specify what type of animal all of the characters are. It will help the reader visual the story better.

(Mowgli's Brothers)


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Mowgli's Brothers
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