Reading Notes (Homer's Iliad Part B)

Part B of the reading begins with direct details relating to Achilles. The first reading "The Rising of Achilles" details the gruesome nature of the battle for the body of Patroclus. I really appreciate the detailed imagery that the story includes, albeit a bit gory. In my own story I hope to include imagery similar to this. I believe that imagery is a fantastic way of drawing the reader in and allowing them to feel apart of the story as much as possible. Furthermore, I would like to point out the characterization in this story. In one of my other classes, we are learning about character spines, or personality traits, facts, themes, and events that happened in a character's life that dictates the way they act, feel, and respond in certain situations. I feel as if this story does that incredible well. Paints a clear and distinct image of each character through the dialogue and actions. Here are a few notable facts about the story:

1. Attempting to gather the body of Patroclus.
2. The dialogue is elevated but not confusing.
3. Zeus becomes angry with Hector's actions.
4. Achilles becomes emotional towards the ed when thinking of his own father.

(Brewminate.com)

Bibliography:

Dr. Theodore L. Steinberg

An Introduction to Homer's Iliad.

https://brewminate.com/an-introduction-to-homers-iliad/

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